Tiny wish

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You made me curse the day I was born.

Because of you my heart got torn.

And if you'd enjoy my sad torment

You won't see me for a moment.

So great my love for you could be

But even greater is my dignity.

u r even a better writer in english..

Thanks for that remark , but my English writing cannot compare to your talent. I have to admit that I didn't think of writing my feelings in English before. I enjoy reading a lot of Arabic poetry, both classical and modern.
You are a true poet at a so young age. Keep going you'll have a bright future ahead. when you'll reach my age (In Shaa'a Allah), you'll find what I am telling you true.

oh.. u made me blush.. well though am flattered with ur comment, but i really don't consider ma self a poet or young .. and don't hav much of plans in this direction..
I js get rid of negative feelings through jotting them down..

and to be honest ur the one who is a poet by all means .. the last poetry u sent to me was the best i ever read,, and i read a lot,, (no compliments)
the best of it is how honest your feeling show in wat u write.